the bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.

the bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.
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The provided bar chart indicates the figures for every teacher spent in three kinds of schools(primary,lower secondary, and upper secondary) in four different countries, namely Japan,
Spain
, Iceland, and the USA, in 2001.
Overall
, the
teachers
in the state spent the most
time
teaching among these four countries.
Also
, upper secondary
students
had the longest learning
time
in all the countries
while
the pupils in primary school had the least. In 2001, the US teacher spent about 1200
hours
teaching upper secondary
students
, which was 300
hours
higher than
teachers
in
Spain
and Iceland, spending approximately 900
hours
.
However
,
teachers
in Japan spent the least
time
in upper secondary
students
' education, around 700
hours
in the year 2001. At the same
time
, the lower secondary and primary
students
in the USA had been taught by
teachers
for around 1000 and 750
hours
respectively. The teacher in
Spain
taught lower secondary
students
for about 750
hours
, which
higher
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than that in Japan and
Spain
around 150
hours
.
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