Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether giving
doctors
,
nurses
and teachers higher salaries than sportsmen and entertainers is a hot debate in society.In my opinion, despite the superstars
also
making plenty of contributions, professional workers definitely work more so they deserve to earn more.
Although
celebrities
also
do contribute to the societies, professionals like
doctors
and
nurses
always do more. They work on the front line, which makes them sacrifice their own time with their families and even their lives, especially in an emergency moment.
For example
, the pandemic
last
few years brought us trouble. As we stayed at home and complained about the lockdown,
doctors
and
nurses
were working with the high chance to get the virus. They might lose their lives.They are irreplaceable by anyone including superstars.
As a result
, they deserve to get more money. Societies should pay them more in order to keep a continuing higher position in the world. Giving professional
people
higher pays to keep them continuing to work hard.
For instance
, working hard and excellent teachers are able to cultivate better the next generations who are the future of a country. It is not an easy job and it requires more intelligent
people
to do it. If the pay is lower than others like superstars,
people
might give less respect for
this
job,which is able to lead to a shortage of teachers in the future.
To sum up
, professionals are not only responsible to individuals now,
for example
,
doctors
and
nurses
save
people
from dangerous situations, but
also
are obliged to the society's future. So I think giving them higher pay is necessary.
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