Some people say that the government should pay for free public libraries, while others think that it’s a waste of money, since modern technologies and the Internet allow easy access to resources from home. Discuss and give your point of view.

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In our modern world,
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the advances in technology and the Internet,
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nowadays can receive any piece of information they want through the Web at home.
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, some claim that having
libraries
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that are free to the public is unnecessary. I disagree with
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opinion and believe that free public
libraries
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should be preserved. In
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explain my opinion.
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, having a free educational source for everyone creates equal opportunity for the poor. Some families do not have the financial privilege to afford advanced electronic devices,
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as computers, or even can't pay the Internet bill.
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leads to many
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spending their time in a public library in order to gain knowledge and study for school.
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, closing free-of-charge
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will cause kids whose fortune is not in their favour
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school, which directly leads to not going to college and eventually unsuccessful job hunting.
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, preventing poor kids from library education is
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unconscious discrimination in an unending circle where the unprivileged continue to be unprivileged.
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, no-charge
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can reduce the number of underage drinking and smoking. Teenagers have a big amount of free time on their hands,
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most cities do not have a variety of activities for young adults.
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leaves youngsters with spare time and most of them are exposed to alcohol, cigarettes and illegal drugs. Studies have shown that having a space
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available for everyone, no matter what it is, will make
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enter that place. That means that keeping public
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free and open will not only decrease the number of illegal drinking but
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gain youngsters great knowledge.
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, local citizens are concerned about their taxes going to nonvital institutes with no profit,
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as public
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,
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other facilities need to be prioritized. An example of
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issue is a mandatory place like a hospital that needs to go through construction in order to expand its capacity,
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taxes are being paid to keep an outdated, useless building. In conclusion,
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about taxes being spent poorly on free public
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, I tend to concede and believe that library is
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an important institute in each city, just as much as other vital places. In my view, the government should pay for free public
libraries
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, based on financial and social reasons.
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