In your letter, you should: describe what kind of website you want say when you want the site to be done explain how vital the website is to you.

Dear Sam Hope you are doing well. I am really grateful to have a friend like you and need your help in making a new

site

. I know that you are so intelligent

therefore

you can make it easier in the way it should be for the viewers. Precisely, the

site

I have decided on is the shopping website. I have made a decision to make homemade costumes which I think people will like the most. You know the name chosen for

that is

The New Dresses, I hope you will like it.

However

, you can

also

suggest to me any other name that will fit into it

then

we can alter it. Fortunately, a friend like you is of great help in giving suggestions regarding the creation of

this

new website. So, I want you to set up the prices for all dresses on the

site

and sort them

according to

their sizes and colours so that they will be easily accessible for people when they will search online in the search section. Sorry to increase your workload but the task of arranging new attire every week into those fits is

also

important which you can handle as well. To tell you about the significance of

this

site

is quite important for me. As I have decided to become a fashion designer and want to increase my sales worldwide which could only be possible on social media by creating a website.

Therefore

, my passion can

also

continue to grow in

this

way when these handmade attire will be preferred by people. Waiting to hear from you positively. I am sure you will never say no. Give me a reply soon and

then

we will meet to discuss it. Your friend Sarah

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

292 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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