The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live
The pie chart and the table illustrate the percentage of which country people living in Australia come from and the area
that
these people live.
Correct word choice
where
Overall
, the majority of Australian dwellers were born right in their birthplace. Beside
, it Replace the word
Besides
seem
that Change the verb form
seems
this
is a suitable place for residents of other countries to immigrate
According to
the pie chart, the Australian population is 73% in their birthplace. While
people in other countries account for about 14%, which is twice as much as the UK. Residents who have home countries in New Zealand, China and Netherlands
account for negligible proportions of 3%, 2% and 1%.
With the information Correct article usage
the Netherlands
that is
given from
the table, 99% of Australians born in China live in the city, much higher than the figures for those from the Netherlands, the UK, or Australia, at 90%, 89%, and 83% respectively. New Zealand, consume the largest rate of those living in rural areas, at 20%.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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