The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevemt
The provided diagram depicts how to produce
sugar
which we need to consume from sugar
canes. Overall
, it is clear from a cursory glance that
this
process includes 7 steps, starting to grow and ending to dry.
In the first place , Sugar
canes have to grow and be ready to harvest for 12-18 months. The second task is to gather them and this
may be done by modern machines or farmers. Crushing is also
a significant part of the production of sugar
, that is
the third act. By that, Sugar
canes are converted into juice
, it has to be said that this
activity is accomplished by special machines.
After these steps , a more complex process begins. Purifying juice
is one of them, in addition
, there is a limestone filter which helps to clean the juice
of sugar
cane. This
is the fourth step and the next one is Evapator. There , Juice
is heated in order to make syrup. The sixth action is a centrifuge which consists of taking sugar
crystals from the syrup. At the end
of the process, Sugar
is dried and cooled , Afterwards , we can take in this
product.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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