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The provided diagram depicts how to produce
sugar
which we need to consume from Use synonyms
sugar
canes. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is clear from a cursory glance that
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process includes 7 steps, starting to grow and ending to dry.
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Sugar
canes have to grow and be ready to harvest for 12-18 months. The second task is to gather them and Use synonyms
this
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canes are converted into Use synonyms
juice
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this
activity is accomplished by special machines.
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juice
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in addition
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juice
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cane. Use synonyms
This
is the fourth step and the next one is Evapator. There , Linking Words
Juice
is heated in order to make syrup. The sixth action is a centrifuge which consists of taking Use synonyms
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crystals from the syrup. Use synonyms
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Sugar
is dried and cooled , Afterwards , we can take in Use synonyms
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