The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The given diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a
salmon
.
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Overall
, there are 5 main stages in the life cycle of Linking Words
salmon
, beginning with spawning when eggs are laid and ending with the Use synonyms
last
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stage
with the migration to spawning areas of salmons. The time a Use synonyms
salmon
live in the river is longer than Use synonyms
this
in the sea.
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At
the first Change preposition
In
stage
, eggs were laid by salmons and developed with the emergence of small salmons which are reared in the freshwater. In the next Use synonyms
stage
, they are reared in the estuary environment which is mixed water in the river and ocean.
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Then
, they start their migration to rearing areas. Linking Words
This
process makes them grow larger in size and become to be mature. The following Linking Words
stage
is when adult fish continue their migration journey to spawning areas. At Use synonyms
this
point, a Linking Words
salmon
lays eggs and the life cycle will begin again.Use synonyms
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