The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The given diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a
salmon
.
Overall
, there are 5 main stages in the life cycle of salmon
, beginning with spawning when eggs are laid and ending with the last
stage
with the migration to spawning areas of salmons. The time a salmon
live in the river is longer than this
in the sea.
At
the first Change preposition
In
stage
, eggs were laid by salmons and developed with the emergence of small salmons which are reared in the freshwater. In the next stage
, they are reared in the estuary environment which is mixed water in the river and ocean.
Then
, they start their migration to rearing areas. This
process makes them grow larger in size and become to be mature. The following stage
is when adult fish continue their migration journey to spawning areas. At this
point, a salmon
lays eggs and the life cycle will begin again.Submitted by mtgngocanh on
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