The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.

The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.
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The map illustrates the different distribution of the
school
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in 1985 and now. The
school
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changed dramatically during
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period.
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, it is obvious that more and more facilities have been constructed in
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school
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and the population increased steadily from 1985 to now, many students studying in
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school
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. In 1985, there were 1500 students in
this
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school
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, and it had a square park
car
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and a road connected with the play
fields
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with an entrance and exit side, which location on the north of the
school
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. On the east
part
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of the
school
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, there was a classroom block that had 2 stories. The playing
fields
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were located on the south
part
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of the
school
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, and on the west side of the
school
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, there were a lot of buildings laid in here, which included classrooms, a
car
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park, a library, and an office. At present, the population of
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school
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increased to 2300, and the north parking
car
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remains but it seized smaller,
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the road connected with the playing
fields
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disappear but the two sides didn't change. On the east
part
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of the
school
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, the classrooms are constructed and the classroom block adds stories to 3. The playing
fields
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seized minify because to make the fitness
center
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and pool. On the western
part
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of the
school
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, the
car
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park was demolished, new classrooms room were built there, and the library changed to a learning resource centre which has a computer room.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, car, fields, part with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout
  • Significance
  • Accessibility
  • Expansion
  • Facilities
  • Trends
  • Priorities
  • Modernized
  • Well-being
  • Sustainability
  • Transportation
  • Innovative
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