The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.
The map illustrates the different distribution of the
school
in 1985 and now. The school
changed dramatically during this
period.
Overall
, it is obvious that more and more facilities have been constructed in this
school
and the population increased steadily from 1985 to now, many students studying in this
school
.
In 1985, there were 1500 students in this
school
, and it had a square park car
and a road connected with the play fields
with an entrance and exit side, which location on the north of the school
. On the east part
of the school
, there was a classroom block that had 2 stories. The playing fields
were located on the south part
of the school
, and on the west side of the school
, there were a lot of buildings laid in here, which included classrooms, a car
park, a library, and an office.
At present, the population of this
school
increased to 2300, and the north parking car
remains but it seized smaller, also
the road connected with the playing fields
disappear but the two sides didn't change. On the east part
of the school
, the classrooms are constructed and the classroom block adds stories to 3. The playing fields
seized minify because to make the fitness center
and pool. On the western Change the spelling
centre
part
of the school
, the car
park was demolished, new classrooms room were built there, and the library changed to a learning resource centre
which has a computer room.Submitted by caelumz1121 on
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