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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Today we find a variety of types of
movies
 and each one has a special effect on
people
.So sometimes we laugh at
movies
 and sometimes we want to know what is happening
at the end
 of the movie. Personally, I prefer
comedy
movies
 because my goal in watching
movies
 is to have fun. On the one hand, we have a lot of specific subjects to choose from
movies
 to watch. But
people
 have different choices. I like
comedy
movies
 and I have some reasons for it. First of all, I choose
comedy
movies
 because I want to receive good emotions from films
for example
 when I was watching
comedy
movies
 I encourage to laugh and it is very useful for my mental.
Secondly
, my favourite actors are
comedians
Change the noun form
comedian
show examples
 actors so I should
comedy
movies
 to see my favourite
people
.
Finally
, life is so hard and serious and it has enough for me so I choose another type of movie like
comedy
.
On the other hand
, some serious
movies
 have bad
effects
 on our life.
For example
, when
people
 see
movies
 with enemies subject, it has some effect on their mood ,
Also
 it can cause some harmful behaviour. Some of these
movies
 are not suitable for children because of their bad
effects
 ,
Finally
Add a comma
,Finally
show examples
 we should attention to the
effects
 of
movies
 on our habits, behaviours and emotions. In conclusion, There are many types of
movies
 in the world and everybody like a specific type. I'd prefer to watch
comedy
movies
 because of their positive vibes.
Also
, some
people
 like serious
movies
 but they should attention to the
effects
 of them on their own lives.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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