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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Today we find a variety of types of
movies
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 and each one has a special effect on
people
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.So sometimes we laugh at
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 and sometimes we want to know what is happening
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 of the movie. Personally, I prefer
comedy
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movies
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 because my goal in watching
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 is to have fun. On the one hand, we have a lot of specific subjects to choose from
movies
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 to watch. But
people
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 have different choices. I like
comedy
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movies
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 and I have some reasons for it. First of all, I choose
comedy
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movies
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 because I want to receive good emotions from films
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 when I was watching
comedy
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movies
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 I encourage to laugh and it is very useful for my mental.
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, my favourite actors are
comedians
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 actors so I should
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movies
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 to see my favourite
people
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.
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, life is so hard and serious and it has enough for me so I choose another type of movie like
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.
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, some serious
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 have bad
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 on our life.
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, when
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 see
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 with enemies subject, it has some effect on their mood ,
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 it can cause some harmful behaviour. Some of these
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 are not suitable for children because of their bad
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 we should attention to the
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 of
movies
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 on our habits, behaviours and emotions. In conclusion, There are many types of
movies
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 in the world and everybody like a specific type. I'd prefer to watch
comedy
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movies
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 because of their positive vibes.
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, some
people
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 like serious
movies
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 but they should attention to the
effects
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 of them on their own lives.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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