The table below gives information about marriages in Australia from 1960 to 2000
The table chart depicts information regarding the changes in marital trends in Australia between 1960 and 2000.
After having a quick glance, it can be clearly seen that in 1960 many Australians accepted religious
marriages
and civil marriages
(42000 and 8000). A decade later, these trends had risen by 4000 each, Moreover
, the number of marriages
continues to grow to reach 50000 for religious and 6000 for civil marriages
. However
, the trend of marriages
decreased significantly by 12000 each. In 2000, the figure for marriages
was 36000 and 40000 respectively.
Post to this
, the normal age
of marriage for women was 21, two years junior to men. In the next two decades, the average age
rose continually by 2 years for both genders. However
, in 1990, the age
gap between bride and bridegroom was almost 1 year. Similarly
, the age
gap was same
in the next decade.
Correct article usage
the same
Overall
, the number of religious marriages
went down throughout the given period. However
, the number of civil marriages
showed the opposite trend, it went up in the given period.Submitted by amanjotkaur532 on
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