The illustration shows information about how an igloo is built from snow.

The diagram shows the various stages of building an
igloo
from
snow
.
Overall
, there are 5 main steps in building an
igloo
, beginning with the hard-packed
snow
and ending with the finished
igloo
.
At
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the first stage, the hard
snow
is packed and
then
cut by a
snow
saw to become a
snow
block having a deal size, namely a
hight
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height
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of 15 inches, a length of 5 inches, and a large of 9 inches. After that, these large blocks are moved to the base. In the following step, the block
that
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is slightly too large for the
last
opening on top. In the third stage, workers smooth the edges of the block with
snow
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saw again. Before blocks are placed in a circle building upward, the people dig a hole under the wall to create an entrance.
Next,
the people use the shovel
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for
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the purpose of
loosing
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snow
onto the
igloo
,
then
pack the
snow
into oil crevices, smooth the inside of the
igloo
by hand and shove out any extra
snow
.
At the
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last
stage involves digging a hole in the shape of the desired entrance,
then
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and then
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cover
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covering
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the hole with show blocks, resulting
a
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in a
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finished
igloo
.
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