One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Over the past few decades,
health
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has become one of the key factors in
people
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's lives, so that
people
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consistently experience a long
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. I believe it has brought more benefits to
people
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. I will review both the positive and negative aspects below. There are tangible benefits that
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derive from improved medical
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. Encouraging
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to see a doctor with advanced medical
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is always a simpler action in the process of maintaining optimal
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. In
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way, any
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problems
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can be prevented, or in the worst case, their negative effects reduced.
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, if
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progressively check their bodies,
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will help to more effectively counteract many diseases (and their effects) at an early stage of disease development.
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is important if only from the point of view of demographics, where by extending
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expectancy we not only allow older generations to benefit from
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, but it is
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the older generation that can
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help the younger generation.
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, as the youngest generation is busier with work, grandparents can help take
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of the children and reduce the burden on the young.
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, elders can teach their grandchildren basic customs and moral values.
On the other hand
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, better
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means longer
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and our
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are not ready for the challenges of
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. Significant
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include providing enough food for the significantly growing number of
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on Earth, we have had
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with
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for years, and there is no magical solution in sight.
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, our pension systems are no longer suitable for significantly longer retirement periods. Almost all pension systems are dependent on the number of
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of working age, and extending
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expectancy significantly increases the tax burden on
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group. It is very likely that it will be necessary to extend working hours, which is of course a very politically unpopular decision and only mature
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can introduce
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solutions across political divides. In conclusion,
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the development of medical
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brings far more positives than negatives.
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, we must remember that
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is not a zero-sum change and the negatives are still very relevant. Longer
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expectancy brings with it costly
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, especially in developing countries whose
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have not yet had enough time to get rich and be able to bear the costs of
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change.
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, the social changes that are taking place
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medical developments are inevitable and we need to think more about how to make the most of them than how to counteract them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consequences
  • improved medical care
  • life expectancy
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • healthcare
  • quality of life
  • population
  • economic burden
  • elderly
  • dependency
  • technology
  • ethical concerns
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