Some people think violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned. Other think that they are just relaxation. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

Many individuals reckon that
movies
which are
violience
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violent
genre
have many drawbacks for people and should be banned
whereas
others believe these
films
are watched for entertainment
purpose
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purposes
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. In
this
essay, I will discuss both
view-points
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viewpoints
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in-depth and show why the latter assertion is more compelling. On the one hand, those who advocate for restricting violent
films
agree that
this
type of
films
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film
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encourage
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encourages
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viewers, especially the young,
normalize
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to normalize
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the violence and encourage them to participate in violent
situations
. For those who watch
this
genre
frequently, they may have
a
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thinking about fighting and using weapons in their society is common because they have seen these scenes many times
from
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in
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films
.
Thus
, they may support participants who use
the
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violence to deal with problems and affect adversely
to
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their society and policy.
Moreover
, to prove their ideas, they organize many violent activities or participate in violent
situations
to attract individuals
join
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to join
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with them so they may think that they are similar to the main characters that they have seen before.
For example
,
due to
the effect of violent
films
, a child from A used a gun and attacked others like
a
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in a
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scene
of
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from
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the film he had seen
in
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the previous week.
On the other hand
, proponents of watching violent
movies
as an entertaining method believe that observing these
films
help
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helps
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them to improve their survival skills and bring new feelings and emotions
for
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to
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the audience. From watching
this
genre
, viewers are able to learn
many
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information about surviving and
cultivate
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cultivating
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their life-and-death skills
although
there are some impractical
situations
.
For instance
, Fast and Furious have many violent scenes which help the audience learn how to protect themselves from
stragers
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strangers
and improve their driving skills as well.
Besides
,
these kind
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this kind
these kinds
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of
movies
bring
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brings
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frightened and thrilled feelings
for
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to
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the audience
via
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by
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representing some
threaten
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threatening
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scenes, which makes individuals more excited. In conclusion,
while
violent
movies
influent people adversely
on
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in
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many ways like normalizing violence and encouraging
to
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them to
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engage in
such
situations
, I concur that
this
genre
of
films
is seen for entertainment
purpose
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purposes
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that
affect
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less to viewer's behaviour and attitude.
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