Some people think violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned. Other think that they are just relaxation. Discuss both sides and give opinion.
Many individuals reckon that
movies
which are violience
Correct your spelling
violent
genre
have many drawbacks for people and should be banned whereas
others believe these films
are watched for entertainment purpose
. In Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
this
essay, I will discuss both view-points
in-depth and show why the latter assertion is more compelling.
On the one hand, those who advocate for restricting violent Correct your spelling
viewpoints
films
agree that this
type of films
Fix the agreement mistake
film
encourage
viewers, especially the young, Correct subject-verb agreement
encourages
normalize
the violence and encourage them to participate in violent Fix the infinitive
to normalize
situations
. For those who watch this
genre
frequently, they may have a
thinking about fighting and using weapons in their society is common because they have seen these scenes many times Remove the article
apply
from
Change preposition
in
films
. Thus
, they may support participants who use the
violence to deal with problems and affect adversely Correct article usage
apply
to
their society and policy. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, to prove their ideas, they organize many violent activities or participate in violent situations
to attract individuals join
with them so they may think that they are similar to the main characters that they have seen before. Fix the infinitive
to join
For example
, due to
the effect of violent films
, a child from A used a gun and attacked others like a
scene Change preposition
in a
of
the film he had seen Change preposition
from
in
the previous week.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, proponents of watching violent movies
as an entertaining method believe that observing these films
help
them to improve their survival skills and bring new feelings and emotions Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
for
the audience. From watching Change preposition
to
this
genre
, viewers are able to learn many
information about surviving and Replace the quantifier
much
cultivate
their life-and-death skills Wrong verb form
cultivating
although
there are some impractical situations
. For instance
, Fast and Furious have many violent scenes which help the audience learn how to protect themselves from stragers
and improve their driving skills as well. Correct your spelling
strangers
Besides
, these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
movies
bring
frightened and thrilled feelings Change the verb form
brings
for
the audience Change preposition
to
via
representing some Change preposition
by
threaten
scenes, which makes individuals more excited.
In conclusion, Replace the word
threatening
while
violent movies
influent people adversely on
many ways like normalizing violence and encouraging Change preposition
in
to
engage in Correct pronoun usage
them to
such
situations
, I concur that this
genre
of films
is seen for entertainment purpose
that Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
affect
less to viewer's behaviour and attitude.Change the verb form
affects
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