Some people think violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned. Other think that they are just relaxation. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

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which are

violience

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violent

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have many drawbacks for people and should be banned

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others believe these

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are watched for entertainment

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. In

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essay, I will discuss both

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in-depth and show why the latter assertion is more compelling. On the one hand, those who advocate for restricting violent

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agree that

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type of

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films

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encourage

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viewers, especially the young,

normalize

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the violence and encourage them to participate in violent

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. For those who watch

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genre

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frequently, they may have

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thinking about fighting and using weapons in their society is common because they have seen these scenes many times

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films

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.

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, they may support participants who use

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violence to deal with problems and affect adversely

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their society and policy.

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, to prove their ideas, they organize many violent activities or participate in violent

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to attract individuals

join

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with them so they may think that they are similar to the main characters that they have seen before.

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,

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the effect of violent

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, a child from A used a gun and attacked others like

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scene

of

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the film he had seen

in

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the previous week.

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, proponents of watching violent

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as an entertaining method believe that observing these

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help

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them to improve their survival skills and bring new feelings and emotions

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the audience. From watching

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genre

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, viewers are able to learn

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information about surviving and

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their life-and-death skills

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there are some impractical

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.

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, Fast and Furious have many violent scenes which help the audience learn how to protect themselves from

stragers

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strangers

and improve their driving skills as well.

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,

these kind

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of

movies

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bring

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frightened and thrilled feelings

for

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to

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the audience

via

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representing some

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scenes, which makes individuals more excited. In conclusion,

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violent

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influent people adversely

on

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many ways like normalizing violence and encouraging

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engage in

such

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situations

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, I concur that

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genre

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of

films

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is seen for entertainment

purpose

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that

affect

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less to viewer's behaviour and attitude.