A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

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Dear Sir, I am writing in dissatisfaction with the inconvenience caused by Hope

cafe

at Bay road. Your

cafe

is just beside my apartment. I would to bring to your attention the problem I faced with the placement of chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. I am currently undergoing treatment for my leg pain and

due to

this

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this,

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I use a wheelchair.

However

cafe

patio chairs and tables have been placed on the way towards my apartment entrance.

Therefore

I am unable to use

this

sidewalk but rather take a long route and enter from the backdoor. It is my humble request to move the current seating arrangement to inside the

cafe

or reduce the number of seats. If

this

issue is not resolved at the earliest I will be reaching out to the authorities of the area and the police. I hope you will consider my suggestion and sort

this

issue at the earliest. Regards, Nani

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task achievement

Focus on providing a more detailed explanation on how the problem affects you on a daily basis to improve task achievement.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph discusses a single idea comprehensively to improve coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for the task.

coherence cohesion

The letter is well-structured with clear and concise paragraphs which help in readability.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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