You participated in a public event organized at a local park. Write a letter to the event organizer. In your letter tell them some feedback about the event; explain what you particularly enjoyed; give some suggestions for improvement.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my warm regards for the public event, which was organized the

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Sunday at the national park. I was a wonder, to attend these kinds of event, which was presented in the finest manner to create awareness about the health benefits.

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, the yoga session was amazing, and it was enjoyed by all age group people.

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, Zumba dance for youngsters and middle age crowd, I believe they were overjoyed and enthusiastic to attend, and

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, the singing performance by some professionals was extraordinary, and that was the relaxing part. Let me explain some unforgettable and enjoyable moments for me during the event. One particular part is singing and dancing

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my friends, we all were overwhelmed and could not stop our enthusiasm to dance, and

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, all of my friends and I were tired and ended the celebration with great fun and memories. I would like to suggest a few improvements,

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as if there were some additional chairs for elders

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they could enjoy the program until the end, fewer public left the park because of the lack of chairs,

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I could suggest some extra trash can help us to keep the place clean and tidy. Thank you for these kinds of events, I hope you will consider my suggestions for

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events. Yours faithfully, Jen