You participated in a public event organized at a local park. Write a letter to the event organizer. In your letter tell them some feedback about the event; explain what you particularly enjoyed; give some suggestions for improvement.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my warm regards for the public event, which was organized the
last
Sunday at the national park. I was a wonder, to attend these kinds of event, which was presented in the finest manner to create awareness about the health benefits.
Firstly
, the yoga session was amazing, and it was enjoyed by all age group people.
Secondly
, Zumba dance for youngsters and middle age crowd, I believe they were overjoyed and enthusiastic to attend, and
above all
, the singing performance by some professionals was extraordinary, and that was the relaxing part. Let me explain some unforgettable and enjoyable moments for me during the event. One particular part is singing and dancing
along with
my friends, we all were overwhelmed and could not stop our enthusiasm to dance, and
finally
, all of my friends and I were tired and ended the celebration with great fun and memories. I would like to suggest a few improvements,
such
as if there were some additional chairs for elders
then
they could enjoy the program until the end, fewer public left the park because of the lack of chairs,
as well as
I could suggest some extra trash can help us to keep the place clean and tidy. Thank you for these kinds of events, I hope you will consider my suggestions for
further
events. Yours faithfully, Jen
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • public event
  • local park
  • feedback
  • organized
  • community engagement
  • performances
  • logistical
  • facilities
  • crowd management
  • inclusivity
  • local businesses
  • atmosphere
  • volunteer
  • memorable
  • suggestions for improvement
  • upcoming events
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