The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts portray information about the amount of
electricity
used. The daily demand counted for winter and summer.
Overall
, in winter, the demand for electricity
is higher than in summer. Meanwhile, the highest percentage of electricity
used is for heating rooms and water.
To begin
with, in winter the daily demand for electricity
is fluctuated, starting from 340000 and ending at the same amount. The highest happens in 23 hours and the lowest in 8 hours. In summer the units of electricity
starts
at 180000, and the number ends at 24 with the same number when it starts. The highest happens at 15, and the lowest is 6.
The second chart shows heating rooms and heating water use at 52.2%, which is the highest and followed by ovens, kettles, washing, and machine at 17.5%. Change the verb form
start
Next,
lighting, TV, radio, vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electronic tools use the same percentage at 15.0%.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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