The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given charts portray information about the amount of

electricity

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used. The daily demand counted for winter and summer.

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, in winter, the demand for

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is higher than in summer. Meanwhile, the highest percentage of

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used is for heating rooms and water.

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with, in winter the daily demand for

electricity

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is fluctuated, starting from 340000 and ending at the same amount. The highest happens in 23 hours and the lowest in 8 hours. In summer the units of

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starts

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at 180000, and the number ends at 24 with the same number when it starts. The highest happens at 15, and the lowest is 6. The second chart shows heating rooms and heating water use at 52.2%, which is the highest and followed by ovens, kettles, washing, and machine at 17.5%.

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lighting, TV, radio, vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electronic tools use the same percentage at 15.0%.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Electricity consumption
Kilowatt-hours (kWh)
Energy demand
Power grid
Renewable energy sources
Non-renewable energy sources
Sustainable consumption
Conservation efforts
Industrial sector
Residential sector
Commercial sector
Fluctuation
Year-over-year comparison
Efficiency improvements
Seasonal variation

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