Today, thanks to improvements in communication technology and transportation, people can work and live wherever they want. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that modern
technology
developed in communication and transport.
However
, people can
work
and stay where they desire. I agree with the advantage's development outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, In the
nation
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people live with advanced
technology
.
Firstly
, They can
work
anywhere
ofbecause
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because
of because
the
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improvement in communication
technology
. The notion complete
work
through
Internet
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, where they can attend office meetings.
For example
, Employees complete the process of communicating through some apps and they report via video calls and video conferences.
Secondly
, employees and employers can connect over long distances and at that
time
they are in contact with face-to-face communication. They clear every doubt through
technology
.
For instance
, in today's life
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every person works for their own a foreign country in a sitting place.
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benefit
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they are spending
time
with family, and friends and saving
time
for own selves.
On the other hand
, transportation improvements can beneficial for every those person who can less
time
for travelling and driving.
Moreover
, the government are improving transportation and they are providing those transports which are fastest to arrive the destination place in cou country
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as
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metro train are providing the fastest way and less
time
to arrive the individual's destination place.
Furthermore
, sometimes workers are late for their
work
and after ,that they are fast to going their advance transporting
technology
. For illustrate, many countries provide advanced
technology
in transportation.
To conclude
, advanced technologies are most beneficial for every employee and employer who can complete
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work
every target on
time
. I believed that the advantage of
this
development outweighs the disadvantages.
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