Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

some people argue that we do not remember the actual reason for traditional festivals and religious as well, we just consider them as a fun moment. ,Well as far as my concerns are I do not agree with

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statement, in the

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essay I will give some reason for it. first of all, It is an unnecessary argument mentioned in

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. Traditional and religious

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become a source of

enjoyment

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, in UK

Christmas

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is the ceremony of joy, happiness and giving and taking gifts and giving charity.

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, at ,

Christmas

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all the family members come together at their paternal house and celebrate that event. Most

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people look forward to the

Christmas

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event as a period of

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and holiday period as well,

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of practising religion. The same behaviour can be seen at non-religious

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as family gatherings, bbq nights and bonfires. People associate

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event with making fireworks in community parks to enjoy the moment because

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is a primary right of everybody.

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, I do not agree with the idea that

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underlying the meaning of

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events

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have been forgotten.

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, in the UK at the primary ,level children learn in detail about their religion and religious

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like

Christmas

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,

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and Easter. They

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have

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orchestra who sing their religious

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at any ceremony as well. In sum , it is true that

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considered religious

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and

other traditional occasion

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another traditional occasion

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as

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enjoyment

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moments but it is

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misconception that we forgot the real meaning behind these

events

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