Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
some people argue that we do not remember the actual reason for traditional festivals and religious as well, we just consider them as a fun moment. ,Well as far as my concerns are I do not agree with
this
statement, in the further
essay I will give some reason for it.
first of all, It is an unnecessary argument mentioned in question
. Traditional and religious Add an article
the question
events
become a source of enjoyment
. For instance
, in UK Christmas
is the ceremony of joy, happiness and giving and taking gifts and giving charity. Furthermore
, at ,Christmas
all the family members come together at their paternal house and celebrate that event. Most the
people look forward to the Correct article usage
apply
Christmas
event as a period of enjoyment
and holiday period as well, instead
of practising religion. The same behaviour can be seen at non-religious events
such
as family gatherings, bbq nights and bonfires. People associate this
event with making fireworks in community parks to enjoy the moment because enjoyment
is a primary right of everybody.
Secondly
, I do not agree with the idea that community
underlying the meaning of Correct article usage
the community
such
events
have been forgotten. for example
, in the UK at the primary ,level children learn in detail about their religion and religious events
like Christmas
,
and Easter. They Remove the comma
apply
also
have children's
orchestra who sing their religious Correct article usage
a children's
song
at any ceremony as well.
In sum , it is true that Fix the agreement mistake
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public
considered religious Correct article usage
the public
events
and other traditional occasion
as Change the wording
another traditional occasion
other traditional occasions
enjoyment
moments but it is Replace the word
enjoyable
total
misconception that we forgot the real meaning behind these Add an article
a total
events
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