This diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summaries the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This

graph illustrates how hydroelectric power

station

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can be produced electricity.

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writing will be done by giving a big picture and the details of

flow

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.

Overall

, hydroelectricity

produced

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is produced

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from

river

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the river

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and it will

processing

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process

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in the morning to afternoon.

While

the process will be stopped at night. In

this

process, there is one machine that will be used, a generator. It contains three main processes.

Firstly

, the

water

from

river

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the river

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is flowing to the dam, which will be opened

at

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day

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the day

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,

then

it will

taking

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the

water

into

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for

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power generation.

Secondly

,

this

liquid will be processed in

generator

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the generator

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and

finally

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the power lines will be produced. At night, the generator

not

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operated and there are two stages to the

water

turn back.

First,

the

water

will be pumped into

high-level

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reservoir.

Last

, the

water

will

be stayed

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at the pipe because the dam is closing during

this

time. The process will be repeated the same every day during

day

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the day

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and night.