Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Developed

countries

provide financial

aid

frequently to poverty-stricken

countries

however

, it is not enough to solve the problem with these poorer

nations

. I completely disagree, monetary

aid

and other things that can be donated are enough because the problem lies now within the

government

of these undeveloped

nations

, and the

aid

given creates dependency. One of the reasons is the corrupt

government

officials in their

countries

. The prevalence of corrupt officials is a huge factor in why poor

nations

remain poor and have no changes because these people think foreign

countries

will not stop providing them with financial

aid

. Leaders steal the money and used it for their own benefit

instead

of utilizing it to help their own people. That kind of attitude must be changed now because the assistance given by the rich

countries

is not permanent, they will

also

need to help themselves in order to prosper on their own. Another reason is that financial

aid

will create a dependency on wealthy

nations

because these people think that developed

countries

could always help them even though, they are struggling

due to

their own choices. Without thinking that wealthy

nations

too, have their own problems to solve like unemployment and healthcare.

This

is unfair to the citizens, who are suffering too but the

government

is unable to help them. In conclusion, I completely disagree that financial

aid

is more than enough for these poor

nations

because their

government

has corrupt leaders and

this

will create dependency problems on the rich

nations

.