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Water shortage is a dangerous problem in the world. Discuss the consequences and solutions for this problem? And do the social media or newspapers spread the awareness among people? And examples which are relevant.

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Today all nations are worried about limited sources of
water
 in the world so it has very big problems and terrible results. We should find a way to give information to
people
 with social
media
 and find the best solution for it. On the one hand, earth has limited
water
 resources and population growth in recent years so if we
use
water
 without my plan maybe one day we or our children have not any
water
 for drinking. So we should have a useful plan for using
water
. Everybody can make some rules which say about managing
water
 in their home and
people
 should follow them .
For example
, families can make a rule that
people
 should
use
water
 in the bathroom for a limited time ,
Also
people
 can wash dishes with washing machines to
use
 less
water
 ,
Also
 government should provide support to
people
 who try to
use
 lower
water
 .
For instance
, give them less money for their
water
 prices.
On the other hand
, today
people
 can affect another person through social
media
.
Firstly
,
People
 who have a variety of information about limited sources of
water
 can share their knowledge with other
people
 and show them a future with less
water
 .
Secondly
, give them easy solutions to reduce their
water
 usage.
For example
, inform them that they don't
use
 drinking
water
 for washing clothes.
Finally
, nowadays everyone has a smartphone that can be on social
media
 and it has very powerful
media
 that everyone's attention to them. We should best
use
 of it for
people
 who live in future. In conclusion, we have limited
water
 on our earth and we should manage our habits of using
water
. We can affect other
people
 by social
media
 and improving their information and giving them useful solutions.
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