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some people say that the main enviromental problem of our time is the loss of partivcular species of plants and animlas. others say that there are more important enviromental problmes discuss both these views and give your opinion

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environment
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problem
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problems
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 become
intenseintens
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intenseness
, some argue that the
firstthat
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first that
 first and foremost issue that should be solved is the
extinction
 of
plants
 and
animals
. At the same time, some believe that
these
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problem
 is not the main
problem
 of
this
world
. In my opinion,
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extinction
 is an important
problem
 but
people
 need to pay attention more
on
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 other urgent
problem
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problems
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such
 as global warming. On the one hand,
extinction
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 of
plants
 and
animals
 can not be underestimated.
Plants
 and
animals
 have
nature
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 correlation in
this
world
which
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the damage of
this
relation
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 will cause negative
effect
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effects
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 and invent brand new
environment
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 problems.
For example
, the
extinction
 of
snake
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snakes
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 as the top animal of
food
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the food
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 chain
lead
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 to an uncontrolled amount of rats. Those rats will attack rice fields and crop failure is the worst result.
On the other hand
, other
environment
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 problems have
urgent
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 phase and bigger effect
for
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this
world
. One of the
example
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 is global warming. As
people
 can see on the news that
this
 issue is getting worse
through
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 time. The damage
of
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earth
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 owing to global warming will cause horrible
impact
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 like the end of the
world
. Since scientists have not found
new
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 planet to live
and
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earth
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Earth
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 is the only planet that
people
 can live on, global warming should be the main focus.
To sum up
, other
environment
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 problems
such
 as global warming should
has
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 more attention from
people
 as
this
 is urgent.
Nevertheless
,
people
 should
aware
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the
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extinction
 of
plants
 and
animals
 to minimize and prevent new
environment
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environmental
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problem
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problems
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.
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