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The illustration shows information about how igloo is built from snow.

#illustration #information #igloo #snow
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The given picture depicts the
stage
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 of how to make an
igloo
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 from
snow
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.
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,
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 the illustration provides five simple steps to build an
igloo
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 by hand and
some
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with some
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 tools. In the initial step, the preparation of
snow
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 is seen in the hard-packed that have ideal position and
then
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 think and count in ideal block size (3 in x 8 in x 15 in) from
snow
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, after that divide to become two large blocks at the base.
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this
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, in the second
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 it is shown that the block is created too large for the
last
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 opening on top,
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that
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is impacted the blocks should be cut smoothly and
create
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 in a circle building upward
that
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do not forget to make a dug
hole
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 under the wall to create on the entrance in
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 three. The next
stage
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 is
shovel
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 loose
snow
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 onto the
igloo
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 that follows which is
packed
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packing
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 the
snow
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 into all crevices, after which smooth the inside of the
igloo
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 by hand and ultimately shove out any extra
snow
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. The final
stage
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 is to dig a
hole
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 in the shape of the desired entrance to offer comfortable conditions and make cover the
hole
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 with
snow
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 blocks to put off the
snow
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 that can enter the
hole
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.
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