Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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some people that youth should be able to support

community

services in their neighbourhood for free.

Although

some people think that working in

community

service does not get paid, I believed that the merits outweigh the demerits. Working at NGO for youngsters has become quite popular nowadays. There are two benefits associated with these activities

such

as levelling up their portfolio and sharpening their character.

First,

many youths think they want to devote their time to

community

service in their neighbourhood to write good portfolios in their resume. These activities sometimes will be considered as added value by some employers,

thus

numerous youth join many NGOs for free.

For instance

, In ,Indonesia young generation follows the Indonesian Mengajar

community

to help the remote area education system for a year to build and support their education because their

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often untouchable by the authority.

Secondly

, parents want their teenagers to grow up having caring and kind characters which is why they encourage teens to join many

community

services.

Besides

that, providing help to the elderly or poorer will sharpen their sensitivity which is important to develop their character in the future.

Therefore

,

this

kind of

activities

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should be embraced by the young generation.

On the other hand

, it

also

has some drawbacks

such

as underpaid

as well as

low motivation in the long run.

To begin

with, working in

community

service is always associated with low wages or even free so it is not attractive for some teenagers, and sometimes when they are joining the

community

and

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their job in the long run lead to demotivation because they actually are not passionate to do.

Thus

, many youngsters are being quit even though they do not finish the duration contract yet. In conclusion, working in the communities services is sometimes associated with being underpaid and not being motivated,

however

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it is necessary for teens to acquire some benefits

such

as a good portfolio and build up their character.

Although

this

trend has some demerits, personally I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.