The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph illustrates the average
temperatures
every month in
London
,
Sydney
and New
York
,
while
the table chart compares the average time these cities shined per year.
It is clear that
Sydney
recorded the lowest
temperatures
during the mid-year,
whereas
at the time New
York
had the highest
temperatures
.
In addition
, there was a significant increase in average
temperatures
each month in New
York
.
On the contrary
,
London
had the lowest average hourly temperature of the 3 cities. On the one hand,
although
average
temperatures
in
London
and New
York
reach 23
degrees
and 30
degrees
in July, respectively,
Sydney
experienced its warmest weather with 25
degrees
. New
York
’s
temperatures
decreased sharply to an average of around 5
degrees
in both January and December and 3
degrees
lower, as opposed to
London
.
In contrast
,
Sydney
had the smallest average
temperatures
in July, just over 15
degrees
.
On the other hand
, New
York
and
Sydney
had quite similar average
temperatures
of 2,535
hours
and 2,473
hours
, respectively.
Moreover
, the average annual
hours
of sunshine across
London
was considerably lower at 1,189
hours
.
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