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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
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The line graph illustrates the average
temperatures
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 every month in
London
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,
Sydney
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 and New
York
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,
while
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 the table chart compares the average time these cities shined per year.
It is clear that
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Sydney
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 recorded the lowest
temperatures
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 during the mid-year,
whereas
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 at the time New
York
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 had the highest
temperatures
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.
In addition
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, there was a significant increase in average
temperatures
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 each month in New
York
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.
On the contrary
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,
London
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 had the lowest average hourly temperature of the 3 cities. On the one hand,
although
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 average
temperatures
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 in
London
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 and New
York
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 reach 23
degrees
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 and 30
degrees
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 in July, respectively,
Sydney
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 experienced its warmest weather with 25
degrees
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. New
York
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’s
temperatures
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 decreased sharply to an average of around 5
degrees
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 in both January and December and 3
degrees
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 lower, as opposed to
London
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.
In contrast
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,
Sydney
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 had the smallest average
temperatures
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 in July, just over 15
degrees
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.
On the other hand
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, New
York
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 and
Sydney
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 had quite similar average
temperatures
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 of 2,535
hours
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 and 2,473
hours
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, respectively.
Moreover
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, the average annual
hours
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 of sunshine across
London
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 was considerably lower at 1,189
hours
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.
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