Animals should not be used for the benefit of human beings unless there is evidence that the animals do not suffer in any way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Tracing back to ancient times, humans have hunted

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for survival, for at least ten thousand years, because there are various merits of

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including, their meat, epidermis, bone, teeth, and internal organs, and

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bring humans huge economic value. As a matter of fact, if you are(100%) vegan, you could not survive without killing

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for basic life support. Having said

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many people still believe that we should not use

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for our own benefit. I agree in part with

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, for the following reasons. I believe that, apart from using them for food and necessary items, it is unethical to exploit

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in some specific practices for human well-being regardless of the anguish that they might confront,

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as running some medical experiments on them which can put them in extreme pain.

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nowadays many cosmetic companies still insist on using animal experiments in the research and development of cosmetics and skin care products, in my opinion, as a consumer and animal lover, I have avoided buying their products for a long time.

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, there are many ways and methods for us to benefit from

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without making them suffer unduly.

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, we do not need to confine

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in enclosures or cages in zoos to entertain and educate ourselves.

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, safari trips can be arranged where

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are in their natural habitats. We can take our children to the zoo and teach them to treasure life and treat

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well, and not hurt them,

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teach them about the meaning of life. In conclusion, I cannot totally agree that

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should be used for the benefit of human beings as we need to eat them and use some of the items from their bodies in our daily lives.

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, unless there is evidence that the

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do not suffer in any way we should not do anything more to

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. Taking the aforementioned arguments and examples into consideration, humans should take care of

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and keep them safe to prosper and flourish, which eventually will educate people.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

344 words

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