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Animals should not be used for the benefit of human beings unless there is evidence that the animals do not suffer in any way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Tracing back to ancient times, humans have hunted
animals
 for survival, for at least ten thousand years, because there are various merits of
animals
 including, their meat, epidermis, bone, teeth, and internal organs, and
animals
 bring humans huge economic value. As a matter of fact, if you are(100%) vegan, you could not survive without killing
animals
 for basic life support. Having said
this
 many people still believe that we should not use
animals
 for our own benefit. I agree in part with
this
, for the following reasons. I believe that, apart from using them for food and necessary items, it is unethical to exploit
animals
 in some specific practices for human well-being regardless of the anguish that they might confront,
such
 as running some medical experiments on them which can put them in extreme pain.
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 nowadays many cosmetic companies still insist on using animal experiments in the research and development of cosmetics and skin care products, in my opinion, as a consumer and animal lover, I have avoided buying their products for a long time.
However
, there are many ways and methods for us to benefit from
animals
 without making them suffer unduly.
For example
, we do not need to confine
animals
 in enclosures or cages in zoos to entertain and educate ourselves.
Instead
, safari trips can be arranged where
animals
 are in their natural habitats. We can take our children to the zoo and teach them to treasure life and treat
animals
 well, and not hurt them,
as well as
 teach them about the meaning of life. In conclusion, I cannot totally agree that
animals
 should be used for the benefit of human beings as we need to eat them and use some of the items from their bodies in our daily lives.
However
, unless there is evidence that the
animals
 do not suffer in any way we should not do anything more to
animals
. Taking the aforementioned arguments and examples into consideration, humans should take care of
animals
 and keep them safe to prosper and flourish, which eventually will educate people.
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