Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely seperate from social life.
Since our job
take
the majority of our daytime (or nighttime, Change the verb form
takes
that's depend
on the job) our colleagues are Change the verb form
that depends
a
important part of our social Change the article
an
life
. We see them everyday
and we usually have to interact with them many times. Do those interactions have to stay strictly professional or is it better Replace the word
every day
including
Change the verb form
to include
then
in our private Correct your spelling
them
life
?
First,
that's
Unnecessary verb
that
depend
on everyone's Correct subject-verb agreement
depends
personnality
. Some Correct your spelling
personality
people
are good to keep distance during the
working Correct article usage
apply
time
's interaction, keep
neutral conversations and Wrong verb form
keeping
seprate
clearly Correct your spelling
separate
the
private Change the word
their
life
and professional life
. On a
Correct article usage
the
other
side, some Change the wording
another
people
can't control it and their personnality
will push them to be friendly with Correct your spelling
personality
people
who
they get Change the pronoun
whom
along with
or be distant tp
Correct your spelling
to
people
with who
they feel Change the pronoun
whom
inconfortable
.
In fact, it is important to feel good at Correct your spelling
comfortable
uncomfortable
work
. A heavy atmosphere caused by tensions between coworkers could effect
very badly out Correct your spelling
affect
life
even when we come back home.
Socialize
with Wrong verb form
Socializing
work
colleagues in the
free Change the word
their
time
can be good
occasion to know Add an article
a good
people
better, away from the working stress and pressure. We can discover another part of personnality
, hobbies. or Correct your spelling
personality
personnal
problems and Correct your spelling
personal
then
we can be more able to understand them during hard time
at Fix the agreement mistake
times
work
.
Of course sometimes in
Change preposition
on
an
other Correct article usage
the
hand
some matters can appear when Add a comma
,hand
line
between private and professional Add an article
the line
life
start be
fuzzy. Fix the infinitive
to be
For example
, when two coworkers becam
a couple and continue to Correct your spelling
became
work
together or when a friendship between two workers can be gossips'
Change noun form
gossip's
start
point.
But since we are all humans with our own sensitive points, it is important to Wrong verb form
starting
be keep
a good atmosphere at Change the verb form
keep
work
by speaking out all the problems to release all the tensions. Communication is the key but also
sharing a good time
with coworkers away from work
can be a nice way to understand more
each other.Correct quantifier usage
apply
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