You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: – explain your situation – describe your problems – tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Mr Singh, I am your tenant who is supposed to move in next month.I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am unable to shift at the start of next month

due to

some issues. Well, I received a letter from my family that one of my uncles is not well and he has been admitted to a hospital for a couple of days.

Additionally

, they said that my uncle would like to meet me during his hard time because he was really connected with me .He is my godfather as well.So, I have to go to my home town as soon as possible to be with him until he will get healthy again.

Therefore

,I am leaving the day after tomorrow from

this

city and I think I will spend at least two weeks at my home.Anyways,I will move to your apartment on June 15,2023. I hope you will have no problem with it.I would like to thank you for understanding me. Yours Faithfully, Anmol Sharma

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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6 paragraphs

168 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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