You recently booked a part-time course at a college. you now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter - say which part-time course you booked - explain why you need to cancel your booking - ask about booking a different course

#course #college #administrator

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

this

letter to request to cancel my program that will run at Tehran University.

Firstly

, I have been studying chemical engineering for one year so one of the significant courses in

this

term is heat transfer which is important consideration I felt the need for extra information and skill in

this

book

consequently

, I choose solving heat transfer issues which was a part-time program.

Although

this

plan was useful content, it had lack of software

as a result

, I made a decision to cancel

this

course. I would be grateful if you could cancel it that would be extremely helpful and I would really appreciate it.

Secondly

according to

an important issue, I need to heat transfer software for development and progress, if possible I would be booked

this

course on the website. I believe

this

course will be caused to promote me a better score

this

term.I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Amirfarzam Shokouhalaei

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time course
Cancellation
Booking
Administrator
Financial situation
Work commitments
Health issues
Inconvenience
Transfer
Subject area
Schedule
Format
Cancellation policy
Refund process
Assistance
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