The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009.

The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009.
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The table illustrates the
percentage
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of
weight
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in 3 categories including
underweight
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, normal and overweight in a country between 1999 and 2009.
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,
men
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are more likely to be overweight than
women
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although
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the rates of overweight tend to decline among
men
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.
According to
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the table, there are more
underweight
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women
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than those overweight throughout the whole examined period.
For example
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, 27% of
women
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are
underweight
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whereas
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the
percentage
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of those overweight is 18% in 1999. It is interesting to note that the numbers of both
underweight
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and overweight rise to 29% and 21% in 2004.
In addition
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, the
percentage
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of the normal
weight
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among
women
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accounts for nearly half in all the 3 years. Regarding the
weight
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of
men
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, the striking difference from the
women
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is that their higher
percentage
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of obesity. In fact, 30% of
men
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are diagnosed as obese
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22% have a lower
weight
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than the average in 1999.
This
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trend continues in 2004.
However
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, it reversed in 2009 when the
percentage
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of those
underweight
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is higher than those overweight with 23% and 19% respectively. About a half
percentage
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of
men
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are normal
weight
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and there is no significant shift for the decade.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, weight, underweight, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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