Some think that private companies should pay for cleaning up pollution, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss and state your own opinion.

Fewer people feel that the corporate
sector
should be liable for cleaning up
pollution
.
on
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the other hand somebody thinks that it is the government,s responsibility
.
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This essay
this
eassy will describe the cleaning population as should the responsibility of the
govt
. or private
sector
.
Firstly
we have seen in
a
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society that many private sectors
has
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taken some
initiative
to clean the
pollution
.we can get a big example in Cox, Bazar sea beach.Many NGOs have taken the
initiative
to clean the
pollution
in the beach
area
.
Further
, some corporate
sector
has provided donations to clean up in some
city
areas and parks
beside
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they are influencing the people to clean the
area
.
Nevertheless
the
govt
. is taking the
initiative
to clean the
pollution
in some
city
areas.
Last
Month we went to Rajshai for my official job.
i
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am really pleased to see the
city
environment.The
Govt
has taken
initiative
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the initiative
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to clean the
city
area
furthermore
they have invested in the
beatification
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beautification
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of the
city
area
.
It
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was really amazed to see the sea in the
city
. In conclusion.the private
sector
and the
govt
,
sector
both of them should take the responsibility to clean the
pollution
that I make a good environment in society.
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