The government should pay for the college fees for everyone who wants to study at the University. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

There is a hot debate about whether everyone's
tuition
in college should be paid by the government.
Although
it will increase the population's education level if our government paid for us, it will become a burden and have more side effects. If
governments
pay the
tuition
,
students
might not work hard like before. People will seldom cherish something they get them free ,especially
students
who have not experienced a lot of hard times in their life. If the
governments
help with the
tuition
part,
students
might take it for granted and
then
they stop studying harder than the
students
now who mostly get the
tuition
from their parents and they know how much work their parents do in order to pay the
money
for them.
This
is
also
a kind of waste of resources
such
as teachers' time and energy with a bunch of careless
students
. Other parts which need
governments
to invest
money
in will be influenced.
Governments
' revenue is limited. If the government put greater
money
into paying college
students
'
tuition
, they have to reduce the fund from establishing other facilities
such
as repairing roads.
As a result
, more people can not share the interests they should have despite paying the same amount of taxes.
To sum up
, from a long-term view, it is not a good idea that
governments
pay
money
to
students
.
Students
might lose motivation to study. Individuals can not have the same benefits from
governments
as before. In my opinion, it is pointless that
governments
pay the
tuition
for college
students
.
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