Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Planet

earth

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Earth

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has been a place to live for

human

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the human

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species.

However

, throughout our lives, it can not be denied that we, ourselves,

has

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been damaging the

planet

by our own behaviour and

this

leads to environmental

problems

. Some people said that we need to find

other

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another planet

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planet

in order to live, considering how damaged the earth is now. The following essay will share my thoughts on why I disagree with the notion.

Firstly

, we need to consider the cost of research on the new

planet

that will be potential for our future. There must be

considerable

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amount of money that the government will spend on

this

. There are plenty of issues that are paramount to be taken care of first.

For instance

, the education system,

family

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families

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in poverty, social discrepancy, infrastructure, and other developments.

Secondly

, there are still enormous activities that we can do to reduce

the

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environmental

problems

.

Vast

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majority of people nowadays have communities that build awareness on

this

issue.

Such

as

,

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apply

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plant

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planting

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trees,

reuse

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reusing

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and

recycle

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recycling

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stuff, no more straws, no more plastic bags, and other activities. Truthfully, these activities are simple and convenient to do. Admittedly,

this

will not help to ease the

problems

in

a

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fastest way,

however

, we need to start

from

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little things that will gradually impact the bigger issue. Governments should take action as well by creating more strict regulations in keeping the environment safe. In conclusion, we can not deny that our

planet

earth

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Earth

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is starting to

damaged

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be damaged

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. We do not need to move to other planets,

nevertheless

,

this

is our task to maintain and reduce the

problems

here. Governments should act towards

this

problem as well.