You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to accommodation office at the college. In the letter, •Describe the situation •Explain your problem and why it is difficult to work •Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

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Dear Sir, Greetings of the day!

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Manijeh Roostaei, a new student in the software engineering major.

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writing to you to explain my problems with my accommodation right now.

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settling in a double room with Sarah Carry, the music student, who is a pretty girl, but with a quite different lifestyle than me.

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, the type of our exercises is dissimilar too.

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, these differences are the cause of some issues between us.

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to her,

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a morning person. It means, she starts her nightlife

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sleeping, so resting well seems impossible for me here.

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, doing our practising simultaneously is unfeasible; since I need to concentrate on coding software, she ought to play her musical instruments.

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, regarding all mentioned items, would you please change my room to a single room, if it is possible? Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Manijeh Roostaei

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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