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Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, some
people
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 believe that dangerous
sports
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 should be banned,
while
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 other
people
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 argue that citizens have the freedom to choose
sports
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 to play or participate
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This
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 essay will discuss both views
as well as
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 state my support for the latter view. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why governments should ban dangerous
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Firstly
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, these
sports
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 could their
players
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 at a higher risk of injury or even death. Because a small technical error could cost the player their lives.
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,
according to
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 BBC, a thousand
people
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 have died
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 taking part in extreme
sports
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such
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 as base jumping, and bull riding.
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, these days, there is a wide range of enjoyable and less risky pastimes which could replace these
sports
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. More specifically,
players
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 can choose swimming or running, which are not only easy to play, but
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 bring a lot of fun and improve their health.
On the other hand
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, other
people
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 believe that extreme
sports
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 should be freedom to participate in. The first reason is that it can solve unemployment issues.
This
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 means that several
people
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 have a talent for dangerous
sports
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. Avoiding banning these
sports
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 could help them create better employment opportunities not only for them
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 but only relating industries like advertising. The second one is that extreme
sports
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 provide the
players
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 with lessons and experiences and skills that they could not learn from other activities. It is the difficulties and challenges of these
sports
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 that push
people
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 to their limits and teach them valuable lessons of bravery and commitment. In conclusion, despite the higher risk of injury, I believe that citizens should have the freedom to participate in dangerous
sports
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,
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 providing more skills and even employment for
players
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • severe injuries
  • fatalities
  • base jumping
  • bull running
  • extreme skiing
  • safeguard
  • well-being
  • regulating
  • avoidable harm
  • healthcare costs
  • burdening
  • personal freedom
  • autonomy
  • training
  • equipment
  • mitigated
  • personal satisfaction
  • mental health benefits
  • resilience
  • adventure
  • assess risks
  • public safety
  • unnecessary healthcare costs
  • outright bans
  • balanced approach
  • stringent safety standards
  • mandatory training sessions
  • adequately informed
  • safeguarding
  • public health
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