You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ............,

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Dear Navid, I hope

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letter finds you in good health. I'm writing

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letter to tell you that I

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moved to a new flat. As you probably know, my old flat was really old, and it doesn't have basic facilities.

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, the air conditioner wasn't working properly. Since my landlord hadn't done any improvement in the flat, I decided to another place.

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, my new place is completely different from the previous one. It has a modern kitchen with a brand-new fridge

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and a wonderful balcony where I can have breakfast every morning.

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, the rent is cheaper, so I believe that changing my flat is one of the best decisions I have made. I have great news for you. My apartment has two bedrooms, and I turn one of the bedrooms into the guest room, so there is plenty of space for you to spend a couple of days at my place. I would be glad if you come to the city at the weekend and stay in my apartment. what do you say? I'm looking forward to your response. Best regards, Amir

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

187 words

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