Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that the most important target for governments is the economic

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citizens think other sectors have to be in the same order as the economy. In my opinion, other sectors

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the economy are most important because economic progress is the result of other progress, for ,example

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and

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. First of all,

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is foremost before others. All developed countries are ranked by income per capita and the higher GDP, the more developed that country. Increasing GDP means

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must have high-quality educational backgrounds because

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can grow the mindset of

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.

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, America is a powerful state in economic growth

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many business activities. The activities are held by a successful businessman who graduates from a prestigious school. It means

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is a subtle

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that affects the economic

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, a

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field which accounts for a better life and long living is a type of progress that

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handle an economic field. A better hospital has rare and suitable equipment that can recover

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quickly.

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, if expert labour gets sick and needs to be hospitalized, the company will lose for a moment because the one who knows to handle the special task is not working

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sickness. If the hospital does not have proper medicine, it can defer that company and result in the economic

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, but if the hospital has good quality equipment and medicine, the labour can recover quickly and go to work again.

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, other sectors are important as same as the economic field. Economic growth is actually the result of better

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,

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, and others.

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can make better knowledge for

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to increase the economy ,

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can recover

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quickly to avoid turnover for employee