The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010

The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010
The maps illustrate the development that has taken place in City Hospital between 2007 and 2010.
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, it can be seen that the City Hospital underwent layout changes with the addition of some facilities
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Wrong verb form
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public
Correct article usage
a public
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car park and bus station, in order to improve their public service. In 2007, a parking lot for staff and the public was located in the same place on the right side of Hospital Road. Bus station located

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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