The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012
The given pie graphs represent the proportion of five book genres' market shares in a supplier from 1972 to 2012.
Overall
, adult fiction
became the most significant area sold by a bookstore by far over time, children's fiction
also
increased its size whilst all other categories lost market share.
The three biggest interested
reading categories were adult Replace the word
interesting
fiction
, children's fiction
and biography, with 20% for each in 1972. However
, whilest
adult Correct your spelling
while
fiction
and children's fiction
rose their total revenues to 45% and 25%, respectively, biography saw a notable decrease by
5% in 1992,and 7% in 2012 to 8% in 2012. Change preposition
of
Therefore
, the proportion of biography sales hit the bottom and placed the last
rank.
Travel and other categories that not
mentioned were the remaining two competitors which had 40% of the total sales in 1972. Travel books share dropped by 5% to 10% in 2012, Add a missing verb
were not
although
slight
increased by 3% in 1992. The others more than Change the adjective
slightly
a
half of incomes Correct article usage
apply
lost
and dropped to %12 in 2012.Add a missing verb
were lost
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