There are more new towns nowadays, it is more important to include public parks and sports for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern towns are becoming more and more in fashion. The number of them is radically increasing, and

as a result

, the expectation to have more of

sports

centers

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and

parks

is rising. I

broady

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broadly

agree with

such

expectation as long as keeping balance among all the needs of the citizens is regarded.

Firstly

, the green feature of

parks

and the wholesome ambience of

sports

communities are, more than clear, to benefit individuals to

breath

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fresh air and to strengthen their muscles. Given the fact that the

solidary

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lifestyle of many urban

carees

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careers

career

, like office work and Net freelancing, lacks adequate physical activity in newly-made towns, it is vital for the current generation to think about their greying ages when it might be too late to grow muscles.

Parks

and

sports

facilities of all kinds, from

the

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neighborhood

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gyms to professional

sports

clubs, all add to the average health level of the residents.

In addition

to that, socializing, as one humane need, is better

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attained in the green atmosphere of the

parks

or in sporting events, rather than not protected or observed vicinities. The latter could provide the young generation with illegal

passtimes

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pastimes

pass times

like dealing drugs or

commiting

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committing

violence.

Parks

also

provide a safe place for many

of

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the family events

such

as

picnicing

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picnicking

picnics

, walking, hanging out, and family games.

Nevertheless

, the authorities of a

city

might

over emphasize

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the importance of

such

amenities. The limited budget of that urban territory needs to be managed to support all the

city

's requirements, from the hospitals

,

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to

school

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and art. That cannot be

limitted

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limited

to only

sports

and

parks

. All in all, the growing

city

life in present-day civilization requires the

city

residents and their corresponding

gonvernments

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governments

government

to pay tribute to the citizens' health and social ties by making more green arenas and health clubs. The resulting fresh air and jubilation caused by increasing physical activities and family

gathering

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are among the pros.