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University Education should be free to eveyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

#university #education #eveyone #income #diasgree
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In
this
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 contemporary epoch, the
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 rate increasing among the population, so some people claim that any student, regardless of background should be released from their tuition fee. Since by mentioned effort level of
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 will rise, but varsities' worth and competitive environment will disappear, the following essay will aim at outlining my partial agreement with the aforementioned statement.
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 with, if universities become fully free of charge, the worldwide citizen
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 percentage will grow considerably.
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, nowadays, approximately half of the population are unable to get a university degree
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 their poor background, and by highlighted effort, there would be growth not only in
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 level but
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 worldwide curriculum would develop because of high requirements.
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, in a number of countries,
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 as Africa or India, there are countless young generations with brilliant talent remaining in poverty position
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 a lack of opportunity. Had the government or colleges given them enough opportunities, they would definitely show their talents.
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,
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 free
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 may be helpful for some people, the worth of high
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 and rival environment inside of them are with big percentages likely to dive downward. To elaborate, the majority of universities are in charge but they give a few enough scholarships every year, and every student tries their best in order to receive them.
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, if everything is free, anyone doesn't want effort and goes through a painful process.
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, Harvard, Standford and Oxford universities are best known for their
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 and they give scholarships for 3-5 per cent of applicants, so
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 spontaneously provides rival nature, as anyone wants to study without a tuition fee. If they were free in charge, we would never know even their names. In conclusion, both sides gave relevant facts, if high
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 stops their charging, the
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 rate will grow, but their worth will die.
According to
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 cited facts, I personally believe that colleges should remain in their recent position.
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