You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area.

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Dear Neighbours, I hope

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email will find you in good health and spirits. I am writing

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letter concerning multiple issues that I have recently addressed with the parking area that we all share together. There has been a plethora of grass grown

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the rainy season which ended

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week.

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, I have noticed that a lot of outsiders have started to park their vehicles in our personal parking space. I would request you all to gather at the community hall today

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and discuss the concerns thoroughly to figure out a solution to these problems.

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issues require to be fixed quickly for everyone's comfort level. The agenda of the meeting is to make arrangements for a grasscutter that will remove the bushes, and the second is to increase the security of the parking area so that no outsider is permitted to park their four-wheelers in that space. I believe my message is clear to all of you, I am hoping that we could take out time and meet all together in the society compound today in the evening. Warm Regards, Madhur Bathla

madhur.bathlaSun Jun 04 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

188 words

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