You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area.

Dear Neighbours, I hope

this

email will find you in good health and spirits. I am writing

this

letter concerning multiple issues that I have recently addressed with the parking area that we all share together. There has been a plethora of grass grown

due to

the rainy season which ended

last

week.

In addition

, I have noticed that a lot of outsiders have started to park their vehicles in our personal parking space. I would request you all to gather at the community hall today

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apply

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and discuss the concerns thoroughly to figure out a solution to these problems.

Furthermore

such

issues require to be fixed quickly for everyone's comfort level. The agenda of the meeting is to make arrangements for a grasscutter that will remove the bushes, and the second is to increase the security of the parking area so that no outsider is permitted to park their four-wheelers in that space. I believe my message is clear to all of you, I am hoping that we could take out time and meet all together in the society compound today in the evening. Warm Regards, Madhur Bathla

Submitted by madhur.bathla on Sun Jun 04 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

188 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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