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Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, whether
people
 tend to watch
movies
 through new
straming
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streaming
services
 and not to visit
cinemas
 has been in the spotlight of public attention. With regard to
this
 matter, I am of the opinion that
theaters
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 are becoming irrelevant because of new streaming apps
in
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these days. In the following essay, the reasons for my argument will be elaborated. First of all, one of the reasons is
people
 can watch
movies
 anytime through new
straming
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streaming
services
. It is a well-known fact that
people
 will feel
unconvinent
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inconvenient
 since most
cinemas
 fix
time
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the time
a time
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 that each movie
start
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starts
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.
For example
,
according to
 research, the main reason that
people
 do not visit
cinemas
 is a number of
people
 cannot work around
cinemas
’
schedule
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schedules
show examples
. Even though
,
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 there are a host of choices which are planned at
cinemas
,
people
 tend to watch
movies
 on Netflix
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that which
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which
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they
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 can watch anytime.
Therefore
, it is evident that
people
 do not need to go
theather
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theatre
 to watch
movies
 since they have
another
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another service
other services
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services
 that they want to watch anytime. Another reason for my argument is that there are various genres of
movies
 in new streaming
services
,
people
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and people
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 can choose
genres
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the genres
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 of
moives
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movies
 which they want. In
cinemas
,
people
 can watch only new
movies
 because the
cinemas
 are limited to space.
However
,
the
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streaming apps have a number of
movies
 and
people
 can choose
movies
 widely to enjoy.
For instance
, when I visited the cinema with my mother, we could not watch the movie because there were the genres of
movies
 that we do not prefer.
As a result
, we came back home and watched
movies
 on Netflix, which are
exitsted
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exited
 a host of contents. In
conlusion
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conclusion
, it is indisputable that there are a variety of opinions concerning
this
 matter. After careful consideration with that in mind, it can be concluded that
cinemas
 have become
irrelveant
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irrelevant
 because of advanced streaming
services
due to
 the reasons above.
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