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‏Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. ‏To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Many people say the best way for recognized by the new public in various cultures and the same age is through
music
, l personally agree with the choice because
music
 assists us to know other
countries
 through singers and gives us the opportunity to make friendships or find a fit partner.
On the other hand
,
music
 helps us to know different several
countries
 we haven’t heard it and visited these
countries
 and watched the customs and traditions,
this
 will the
countries
 on a big development economically and commercially and
also
 raise the level of tourism and companies to Export food like noodles, for , the example we see band BTS in Korea they help enormously their country and they’re all stages like increasing sales , become Korea the most counter visited around the world though few years.
On the other hand
, there are several fun on make friendships and found partners by common sharing like news singers or albums on pages or YouTube at parties for longer hours surely
this
 will create curious to recognize people who have the same styles
also
 there are many fun doing Donations for cases bad for people ,
for example
 ,a recent study found major the donations the comes of fun singer for victims like a tsunami and an earthquake like doing Turkish famous. In conclusion,
as a result
 ,we can’t deny it is a lot of singers doing many for their
countries
 , or have the country in development in all stages. I believe that
music
 is essential not only for these things but
also
 it assists us in spending time relaxing our nerves. become Korea the most counter visited around the world though few years.
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