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A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter: Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

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Dear college head, I am writing to inform you about the fact that there is going to be a special day in our college as an international day is an exciting experience for me.
Therefore
, I would like to participate and share stories about my country with pupils from different traditions, which involves special landmarks and festivals
such
 as Song-Kran Day, the New Year festival in Thailand. Particularly, street foods are famous, which can attract foreign tourists. I appreciate your perspective that you always support and emphasize
student's
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 creativity.
This
 activity can be highly beneficial for students because they provide opportunities to interchange information, languages, and cultures together. They are able to comprehend the traditions of other
peoples
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people
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. I believe that it strengthens the relationship between instructors and pupils.
Finally
, I would like to request that you recommend how I can make a PowerPoint presentation
that is
 able to attract audiences and create comprehensive content. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Niracha Hokpudsa
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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