the bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022and the forecast for 2032 The pie chart shows the geographical structures of these imports in 2022. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main geatures and make comparisions where relevant.

the bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022and the forecast for 2032 The pie chart shows the geographical structures of these imports in 2022.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main geatures and make comparisions where relevant.
The bar chart represents the total amount of expenditure spent on importing seafood to the USA
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between 2002 and 2022.
Additionally
, it
also
gives forecast money that will be spent for the
year
2023.
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pie chart
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countries from which food is shipped in the
year
2022. Over the years Shipment of foreign food has seen an increasing trend reaching its peak by the end of 2022 and most of the cuisine is brought from China and Thailand. In the
year
2002, only 5 million dollars is spent on
this
purpose and the rate kept growing drastically by twofold every decade reaching 20 million dollars by the end of 2022.As per the prediction, there would be a slight decline of 3 to 4 per cent in the
year
2032. In the
year
2022, China and Thailand contributed half of the
overall
imports received.
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one-fifth of it is from
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Canada.
Whereas
,Indonesia and some other countries exported nearly 9 per cent.Vietnam and Ecuador have a small role of 8 and 7 per cent respectively.
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