Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Painting,poetry and
music
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are a hobby of men and women.
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fascination is created in childhood .particularly the certain
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think that anybody can make
art
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,
music
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and poetry. But some others believe that it is an exceptional
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which should create.
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essay will be discussed in brief
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are thinking about the issue and share my opinion. ,
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skill is a special skill in human being anybody can create.because it is dependent on a wish and tries.
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am trying to create these skills since childhood.Now she is trying
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apply
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painting, poetry and
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she is getting some knowledge from her school ,especially painting. the school has created
willingness
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a willingness
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for
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skill and I believe that
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passion will be held in future to make an
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think anyone can create an
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art
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a few
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believe that it is a special
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which is created by
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agree with
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comment.,Generally nobody can create an
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without
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had fascinated with
music
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. so that i and my friend started a
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daily activities.At certain times I cannot continue the
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with my friend.but my friend continued trying to be the best singer.Now he is a famous singer in our country.so without
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can not possible to
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these things. In conclusion,
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said that practices make a perfect to create
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ability
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anyone can not acquire easily. If anybody obtains they have to more
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it will be a created
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal form of expression
  • inherent aspect
  • specialized skills
  • innate talent
  • specialized training
  • evokes deep emotions
  • resonates
  • folk art
  • street art
  • digital media
  • traditional institutions
  • formal education
  • groundbreaking contributions
  • rigorous training
  • profound art
  • inclusive activity
  • meaningful work
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