The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
The chart above shows us the number of seals,
whales
, and
dolphins
recorded in the Gormes Straits from 2006 to 2018. The chart consists of the number of each recorded individual in 2006, 2010, 2014, and 2018.
According to
the data, each of the animals has a different recorded trend. As we can see in the chart, the number of seals in 2006 was 43
individuals
, but decreased to only 25 in 2010 and went up until reached above the 2010's previous
population
in 2018.
Whales
have a relatively stagnant
population
trend. The
population
of
whales
in Gormez Straits is just slightly up and down between 20 - 30
individuals
and set foot at its peak in 2018 for 28
individuals
.
In contrast
,
Dolphins
have very different trends when compared with the trends of seals and
whales
. The
population
of
dolphins
keep increasing through the years. In 2006, the
population
of
dolphins
was just 16
individuals
,
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and made to its peak in 2018 of 52
individuals
.
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  • Bar chart
  • Recorded
  • Gormez Straits
  • Fluctuation
  • Seals
  • Whales
  • Dolphins
  • Height
  • Individuals
  • Steadily declined
  • Relatively stable
  • Lowest
  • Significant increase
  • Approximately
  • Slight recovery
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