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The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many. However, there are some who argue that it is actually destroying our communication skill. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The
internet
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 itself is one of the greatest inventions that humans ever had. The
Internet
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 makes people all around the world connected. To illustrate
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, global communities are sharing information, communicating, etc. with each other. But, there are some negative views about the
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 too. Let us discuss the positive and negative side of the
internet
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.
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, the
internet
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 become a great tool for us to share anything,
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 as pieces of information, entertainment, our feelings and thoughts, sciences, and many more things. The
internet
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 itself is supported by increasing technology equipment,
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 as computers, laptops, smartphones, and even smartwatches and smart TV. These massive changes are derived from the increasing need for
communication
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. So, in the current situation, the existence of the
internet
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 and its support equipment make us easier to communicate with others.
On the other hand
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, the
internet
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 slightly makes our
communication
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 behaviour change. Actually, human is a social living
creature
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. The first form of our
communication
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 is a direct conversation, which needs language, facial expressions, body gestures, and intonations to communicate. In the beginning, we were thought by our ancestors about manners to communicate. Since the breakout of indirect
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, especially through the
internet
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, our societies are forgetting the basic norms of
communication
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.
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,
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 the massive distribution of the
internet
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, people with less knowledge start to share hoaxes to misinform and divide our community. In my respective opinion, people need to learn more about the basic manners of
communication
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. Even though we can communicate with each other with our gadgets, sometimes we need to have direct conversations, namely face-to-face meetings, and it must support our
communication
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 manners.
To conclude
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this
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 discussion, these two sides of the
internet
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 make our societies connected better, but
also
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 make us lose the basic value of
communication
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.

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